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Ooooh, I'm working on a newsletter this week about layout and white space just in regular text pages and how I don't think we writers play enough, and I'm definitely gonna reference this post. Because this idea of the feel of how a page looks is exactly what I'm getting at, and even in non-graphic novels I think we still have room to play with stuff like that!

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Oh awesome! So glad it’s helpful for your post. I look forward to reading it, Sarah!

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That's so important to talk about! I was obsessed with white space and page layout as a writer, and I think it was a direct path to becoming a visual storyteller. I assume you're familiar with Ander Monson's "The Designed Essay"? Gets to the heart of it: " I also want the designed visual experience that graphic novels and memoirs and essays can offer us in visually suggesting the passage of time, the space between two things represented separately."

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Oooooh looking that up now!!

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Would love to know what you think!

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Katherine, your well-done explanations and excellent visual examples help my untrained eye understand the intention behind the panel borders.

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Thanks so much, Joyce! I’m glad it was clear to someone who isn’t steeped in this world.

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Love seeing the comparisons here! On this topic, Tove Jansson’s Moomin comics are super creative with their panel borders. There’s just so much possibility!

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Thanks for the recommendation, Maddy! I should look more at this comics.

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Really liked how you laid this out. No pun intended. ;)

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Thanks Charlie! Good pun too!

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I love how this post uses each visual example to show the differences clearly. Using hand-drawn panels with comics created on actual paper gives a nice, authentic feeling.

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Thanks, Khalid. I'm glad the differences are coming!

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I hand draw panel borders for my comic strip even though I know I could save tons of time by doing it digitally. I don’t know why I resist this.

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I'm guessing you resist digital panel borders because hand-drawn look a lot better for your work! I resist digital speech bubbles for mine, even though I'm working in Clip Studio Paint where they'd be so easy to create.

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And clip studio paint is another thing I’ve resisted even though I’m using Photoshop CS6 running on a very old laptop (which has replaced another very old laptop, bought secondhand) to do my colouring and preparation for print. Old habits die hard!

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Great post! Thanks for showing so many examples. No strokes really does work the best, but I loved seeing all of the other ways it might have gone.

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Thanks Alece! I’m glad you agree that no strokes worked best for that story!

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Another super-smart, practical lesson! Love!

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Thanks so much, Kelcey!

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This is such a great piece, with wonderful examples.

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Thank you so much, Jon!

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Very true. I like your technique of testing borders - will consider that when I move forward with the next draft of my GN!

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So glad you found it helpful, Rachelle!

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Great piece! This is something I'm playing with a lot now as a beginning visual storyteller/illustrator. How do you think these panel borders translate to a digital-first or digital only format? Are they still (as) necessary? Would love to hear your thoughts!

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Thanks, Michelle! I think it's just as important with digital work. And all my panel borders in these examples are made in Photoshop. My work is a combination of digital and traditional watercolor, but I find making panel borders a lot easier digitally.

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Love this! Thank you for sharing and for explaining in such a clear way. I always pay attention to the panel borders as well. They are definitely part of the whole visual storytelling package! 😊

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Thanks, Maple! Yeah, they're really hugely important.

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